An agency has requested to read my full manuscript. After I had submitted it, I had been waiting to hear from them for about two weeks. Those two weeks were nerve racking. I began rereading my book and noticed so much more that needed editing. They were small things, but they were imperfections, so I did another round of editing. I took the liberty to send the revised manuscript to them just in case they hadn’t received my original submission (they never confirmed with me that they got it).
The lady that I was in contact with informed me that she was 100 pages in and did not want to switch to a new file. I learned that she was an intern at the agency and it was her job to review my manuscript and then write a report to submit to her boss. As far as I can tell, this report is going to be the deciding factor in whether the agent chooses to offer me representation or not.She also informed me that whatever her boss’ decision is, he will let me read her report verbatim. While that is very comforting, this chance to communicate with an agent about my novel and my future as an author is monumental. It is also a critical opportunity for learning any information that can help me to succeed if, *knocks on wood*, he chooses to pass.
I can only hope that they can look past any minor errors that may have existed in the version of my manuscript that she read. I’m hoping that they can say, “With editing, this book would be great!” What I don’t want to hear is, “I’m sorry, while your story is compelling, your writing isn’t strong enough.” (Or something of that sort). So, in during the wait for their response, I have prepared a great many questions. When I get that phone call, I want to be ready.
- (The BIG question) What did you think of the story of The Soul Smith?
- What criteria was I being evaluated against?
- As an agent, what are you looking for in a book? (e.g. marketability, story, characters, originality, length?)
- What are you looking for from the author? (e.g. commitment, motivation, coach-able, long term relationship?)
- What was I doing well in my book?
- What is my greatest area that needs improvement?
- (If necessary) Am I worthy of a second chance?
- What did he like about my query letter? What caught his eye when I submitted?
- (Assuming he offers me representation) What are the next steps? (e.g. professional editing? submitting to publishers? getting it translated for international submission?)
- What services do you provide as a boutique agency?
- What could a full agency provide that a boutique agency cannot?
- What are the terms you are offering me? (% for international and national sales)